A dalek.

W-H-E-R-E-'S M-Y D-E-S-C-R-I-P-T-I-O-N??

their eyes are blue __ their body ıs smooth and shiny,they are completly bald, theır ears and mouth are made of light bulbs,they makes funny sound, they have an exterminator and
murder pump and the face is made of agoold covered metal.

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Rose Tyler

Hello! My name is Rose Tyler. I am quite thin. I have long blond hair with some brown streaks. I have a normal- sized nose. I'm of medium height. I nearly always wear earrings. I have an enormous wardrobe in my room.
By Ji Woo

My name's Sang-Woo...

Hi! I'm 10 years old - but 11 years old according to the Korean way of counting. My nationality is Korean and I was born on March 25th, 1998. I currently live in Bebek. I have over 100 pets. I like Bionicle, Doctor Who, the science comic "Why" and B n B. I like sleeping. I don't like . As for food, I have a passion for spicy food, dumplings, noodles, some Turkish food, pizza, spaghetti, meat and friench fried. Cola, Sprite, water and milk are my favourite drinks. My favourite films are Doctor Who and Star wars, especially The New Hope.

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My name's Ji-Woo

Facts about me.

Hi! I'm from Korea. My birthday's on April 29th and I'm 10 years old. I'm living in Istanbul, Turkey. I don't have any pets but I used to have two fish when I was seven years old. I love Korean food, French fries and pizza. I love reading. My favourite music is pop music and the film I like the most is "DOCTOR WHO." I like drinking sprite and fanta (lemon fanta). My favourite sport is swiming and I am very keen on computer games.

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